Storyboads for added narrative

These were the rough storyboards drawn up for our narrative, following an idea that we had thought of.

Shot List

First shot - Mid-long two shot of the couple on the bed

Second Shot - Close up of 'I love you' message

Third Shot - Mid shot of the couple hugging

Forth Shot - Change of scene and location to a long shot of the couple arguing

Fifth Shot - Long shot of girl leaving the house and walking down the street

Sixth Shot - Close up of the girl, moving with her as she walks away

Seventh Shot - Change of location to mid shot of party scenes

Eigth Shot - Mid shot of girl coming into the door, camera pans to follow her as she greets her friends

Ninth Shot - Mid shot of guy coming through the door

Tenth Shot - Mid Shot - Close up of the girls showing their reactions

Eleventh Shot - Long shot of guy as the girls sweep past him, completely blanking him

Twelfth Shot - Long shot of girls walking away arm in arm

Thirteenth shot - Mid shot of girl as she stops to get the note from her pocket

Forteenth Shot - Close up of the 'I Love You' note again

Fifteenth Shot - Close up of her scrunching up the note

Risk Assessment for filming of narrative

Situational Hazards	Actions to be taken
Cold/Warm Environment	Cast and crew to take jackets on set for in between takes and light clothing as well
Loose wires	Cast and crew to be aware of wires
Sharp object/material	Cast and crew to stay away from sharp objects within the kitchen
Slippery surface	Cast and crew to keep shoes on at all times and if any spillages show, to mop them up immediately
Trip Hazard	Beware of all surroundings and for all band and crew to wear shoes at all times.

Production Schedule for filming the narrative

Adding A Narrative

After receiving our feedback from various audience members, we realised that it was very difficult to satisfy our audience for the duration of the song with just a performance based video.

My idea for adding a narrative was originally to have a storyline from a girls point of view to begin showing her with her boyfriend in a fun relationship to really show the chemistry between the. This was ideally to reflect the lyrics at the start 'we started out as friends, it was cool but it was all pretend' to show them progress into something more than friends. This was where the idea came in that the male character would then give the female a note saying 'I love you' to signify the change in relationship status. As the song progresses, so does time, and the two begin to have problems which are reflected in the lyrics 'How come I never hear you say, I just wanna be with you' and this is the point where the two are seen arguing together and as the boy tries to get her back, she storms out of the door and down the street. Whilst storming down the street, the boy chases after her, but she shrugs him off relating to the lyrics 'I'm soo moving on'.

After this she then goes to a house party with her girl friends to show her having a good time without him around and so she can 'breathe for the first time'. However the boy then shows up at the party, but instead of reacting to it, she walks away past him and out the house with her girls by her side. At the end of the song she then takes the 'I love you' note out of her pocket and throws it on the floor to show that she has well and truly over him.




This video shows a smiliar idea of having the couple arguing at the beginning that I want to create.