The First Draft of our Narrative

After the shoot, we transferred all the footage onto the school computer, and I also decided to copy the footage to try and edit some of the video at home.

I decided to do a rough edit of the narrative to show the others in my group to see if it was something that they could see was working and going in the right direction. I uploaded the video to YouTube so that friends could also see it and give their feedback on it.
This video was the first draft and shows the point of view from the guy. We decided that the narrative didn't make much sense, so we looked at other ways of improving this.